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  1. Greg
    Greg February 15, 2009 at 3:06 am |

    Wow, it really has been awhile. Getting close to the 5 year mark. I honestly can’t believe it’s going to be active once again. Very much looking forward to getting back into “Present Time,” one of the few Inuyasha fanfics I still have an interest in…

  2. Kiana
    Kiana May 5, 2009 at 12:10 pm |

    I’m glad you made sure not to use ‘kid’ in Inuyasha’s thoughts this time. That always bugged me that he used ‘kid’ only to complain about it later in the original version. You might still want to omit it completely from the text though, just to avoid that confusion later. Try ‘child(ren)’. It’s a slightly more formal word for ‘kid’.

  3. Charmaine
    Charmaine July 10, 2009 at 7:58 am |

    This is also more polished, I agree about using the word KID, not necessary. I think you should start your repost on Fan Fic, when the new reviews poor in you will really get motivated

  4. catyuy
    catyuy July 10, 2009 at 9:11 pm |

    I’m still insanely happy that you’ve come back to this story.
    I will now go and read the other chapters that you’ve reworked.

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