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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 24, 2005 at 9:39 pm |

    Interesting start. 🙂 Very well thought out so far. In the last line you mentioned “Wizard” though, you might want to change that since Harry doesn’t know that he’s a wizard yet so the readers shouldn’t be told of things in terms of the Wizarding World yet.

    This is one of the better Blind!Harry stories that I have ever read. 🙂

  2. animealam
    animealam January 25, 2005 at 2:17 pm |

    umm… I see what you mean on that last line. It was really to give a general idea to the readers of how strange that ability was. I’ll see if I can change it or if I can’t come up with something better then I can simply remove it and point this abililty later in the fic.

    I really wanted to make this story different from the blind!Harry stories around, I just hope I can make it in the long run.

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