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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 9:32 am |

    “You-Know-Who is back land you Mr. Potter are among his main targets.” back and

    “None of us shares his views.” share

    “yet not even the twins would Joke about something like this.” joke

    “and longer depended on a guardian, at least on the Wizarding world…” and no longer

    “…not even in the muggle world.” Muggle is always capitalized

    Haha, yay for Harry! 🙂 I love Arien’s coos. It looks like Harry’s summer is turning up. 🙂 I’ve been writing out all the typos and little things- sorry if that’s not what you wanted; just lemme know if it isn’t and I’ll stop.

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