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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq December 15, 2004 at 9:52 am |

    This was interesting so far. 🙂 I didn’t know who all the characters were at first but I now know. I like it, it seems cute and could have a lot of potential for angst and weakness/strength/helping moments.

    I liked how Harry felt the gargoyle, how Snape put little snacks and told the house elf that it was his duty to tempt Harry with different types of food.

    The green font was unusual- what was it for?

    I haven’t read all the plot bunnies in their entirety yet so I might have missed the beginning to this one; after I reread them all I will be sure. 🙂 On to the next part of this one!

  2. animealam
    animealam December 15, 2004 at 10:50 am |

    Thanks for the comments. I do have a bit more of this on how Severus found Harry and some bits of Poppy and a few explanations. I have them on the tablet and haven’t converted the notes to text yet, but I’ll do this during the week.

    The font color is a way that I devised to keep track of how I go about modifying a story.
    Black is the original draft, dark blue is the first revision, green is the second, brown the thrid, orange the fourth, dark violet is fifth, bright blue is sixth, pink is seventh, teal is eight, light violet ninth and I have yet to need a tenth, although for the last chapter of Apprentice I was getting worried since I modified it so much that I used the light violet.
    You can imagine that it did not resemble the original draft at all.

  3. animealam
    animealam December 15, 2004 at 10:53 am |

    There’s more to this one and I’ll add the link to where it is in a moment. I just had to cut it because apparently it was too long.
    There’s a cute scene in Albus office.

  4. jan_aq
    jan_aq December 15, 2004 at 1:33 pm |

    Hahaha!! oh my gosh, your eyes must have hurt at first! I guess that you got used to itthough. All those colors would distract me but that’s really interesting.

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