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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 4:51 am |

    “So why shouldn’t I whish to be with those few…” wish

    “…Also, when Mr. Malfoy doesn’t start the hostilities it’s the Weasley brat. That boy is the worse influence your Daramee could have…” Fix the beginning of this sentence- it doesn’t sound smooth enough to be part of the earlier dialouge.

    “…Then promise me that the moment you suspect they are unto you, you’ll leave His service.” on to you

    “Severus hesitated to accept Naiya’s invitation, he hand Potter had drawn a truce..” on one hand

    Wow I love ‘watching’ Severus with the babies. So sweet. Interesting story so far.

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