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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 2:58 am |

    “He’s going to want to spend as much time as he possibly cans with you.” can

    “Harry knew Naiya could protect herself, but these little babies were defenceless.” defenseless

    Awwww!!! :*) That was so sweet! I love the widdle babies! 😀 The part about Naiya dying is so sad. She’s a good original character- developed but not too overdone and definitely not a Mary Sue. 🙂 ‘”Rhiannon needs to be burped, whatever that is; and Kheelan is still hungry.” He informed the women.’ I think that there it should be something more like “Rhiannon has a funny tightness in her tummy… building up and Kheelan is tsill hungry.” because Harry would probbaly feel their feelings, not be gievn information that he doesn’t know about. I don’t know- maybe that information was added to the stuff he got from Naiya but it still seems like he should be sent the feelings. 🙂

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