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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 2:18 am |

    oh wow. O.O That was unexpected. Okay…

    The part about Harry and Niya was kind of startling and the children.. wow. It’s interesting though… lots of potential. 🙂

    Petunia’s character- I liked the part about the dog and how she blocked everything. I would have liked to see her come to a “sick realization” that how she had behaved to Harry was unforgivable or something… some kind of horror or uncomfort on her part would be nice. Right now she feels a little like a “Oh well, we treated the boy horrible, I see that now but let’s not worry about it” kind of attitude.

    Interesting story so far…

  2. animealam
    animealam January 12, 2005 at 12:14 pm |

    I did some checking and it seems I had the link wrong so you can try and see if you can read part three.

    I’ll probably do som major corrections to this, as it’s basically the raw idea and I have not made too many corrections and developements of this plot.
    I also have not dedicated it lot of time, only enough to have the idea on ‘paper’ so I would not forget. I’m not really sure when I’ll be able to write this one as I really want to finish the others I already have posted at ff.net

  3. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 3:56 pm |

    Yeah, it seems like a really involved story. It’s very interesting but I’m enjoying your 20 other fics a little bit more. 😛

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