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  1. jan_aq
    jan_aq January 12, 2005 at 6:27 am |

    “none of them was any good at potion making” neither of them were any good

    “He could only guess that it had been already cleaned, but there were bits and pieces of cauldron on the floor and some of the books were still on the floor.” get rid of one of the “floor”s

    “He began the last chant and the thick liquid, now and odd sort of red colored goo” now an odd sort

    Interesting story so far. 🙂 Poor Harry. I can’t wait to see Snape’s reaction when he realized what he just did.

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